The utmost importance reason is that to provide up-to-date training methods, access to top quality facilities for laboratories and improve other relevant qualities of training need much more money than other social activities and sports. A case in point, university can build a body building club and a pool and these can attract many students for year upon year. In contrast, in a research laboratory, each student needs special material and equipment to test hypotheses and also every one of them needs qualified teachers, good workshops and high-speed internet to gather information which all of these aspects need financial supports much more than other aspect that are irrelevant to education.
Second of all, for universities education is a long-term aim, while other entertainment and activities are short-term aims. Actually, these activities – sports and social activities - are for having a quick break which students, even who go to the university form dawn till duck, do not spend much time on them and even sometimes, they tend to kill some time by these activities due to they are not really the ultimate aims for students. Educational institution are not such modern clubs! Actually, the quality of a great university is related to the characteristics of good education. As a result, the more focus on its ultimate aim, the more successful to provide training.
Last but not least, most people would agree that in case students have more facilities for sports or other social activities, they will indulge in them and distract from study. Actually, universities must encourage students to study, research and publish articles in prestigious journals by spending money on those and must not throw money at things which distract students. Of course, all of students wish they took advantages of a club full of modern equipment instead of go to a boring laboratory. Thus, university ought not to have a modern club.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 506, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs qualified" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'qualifiing' or 'to be qualified'.
Suggestion: qualifiing; to be qualified
...theses and also every one of them needs qualified teachers, good workshops and high-speed...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, second, so, thus, while, even so, in contrast, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17571884984 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82945966962 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7926579917 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994418144497 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365346777364 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025702027871 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682526899681 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158384993539 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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