Being aware of what is going on throughout the world, even if it doesn't have an effect on our daily lives, could be important, since it results in increasing knowledge, helping each other and making relationships between people.
To follow up the news about other countries, expands knowledge. People are able to increase their knowledge range through knowing current events which happen around in globe. For example, inhabitants in Tehran will probably never experience a volcano. Unlike them, on the right side of the earth, volcanoes occur frequently and people in these lands, like Japan or Philippines, are possibly victims of volcanoes. Therefore, citizens in Tehran can know what exactly happen on the other side of the world, by following news through different media and increases their knowledge about volcanoes.
Being conscious about events happening throughout the world, enables people to help the poor. I believe that, human beings are members of a whole and if one member is afflicted with pain, other members uneasy will remain. For instance, when we follow tragic news from Africa, where many people and children are starving, we have a chance to aid the poor and provide fresh water and food for them.
To talk about the news happens in the world, helps people to have more relationships with each other. I believe that, knowing about current events enable people to talk about them, which in turn makes them to be in touch with each other more than before. For example, me and my grand father usually have discussions about what happens other countries, and in this way, we can build up more communication.
In my opinion, it is very important for people to be aware of what is happening throughout the world, because it helps them to expand their knowledge, helping each other more efficiently and make more relationships and communications with others.
- TPO 35 writing 3
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 61
- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 73
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 85
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ing on throughout the world, even if it doesnt have an effect on our daily lives, coul...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he earth, volcanoes occur frequently and people in these lands, like Japan or Phi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06129032258 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59565994928 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3709803026 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169750908858 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074097873036 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393410415402 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983976801421 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333900486134 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.