Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live.
Upon the question has technology made the world a better place to live, different people have different opinions based on their educations, emotions, cultures and so forth. From my point of view, technology has some advantages and disadvantages but I believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.
First of all, people can easily travel to other cities and countries by giant airplanes. Undoubtedly, without this kind of technology, it takes days or even months to travel. Students can go to school or university and obtain knowledge by automobiles. These days, some students prefer to stay at home and attend online courses and programs. In my opinion, the invention of computer and the Internet has changed our lives dramatically. People can get easily online, read the headline of the newspapers, purchase necessary things while they are sitting on the sofa and drinking a cup of coffee.
Secondly, technology help people communicate with their friends or relatives in a more convenient way. In my point of view, telephone and cellphone are among the most significant achievements of humankind. Nowadays, most students live far from their parents in another cities or countries. They can chat with them easily by their cellphone.
Finally, it is important to bear in mind that although technology helps people a lot, it has some negative consequences. For example, air and noise pollution, global warming, genetically abnormalities which are due to genetically modified foods are some bad influences. Some kinds of technology are harmful for our mental and physical health. For instance, a lot of television programs have negative and long term consequences on our children. In addition, countless people pass away or become injured in highway accidents.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that technology has some benefits and drawbacks but I think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3642172524 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99454263118 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8030499949 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2777777778 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121272125399 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339484358823 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520675759062 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703006858727 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633400857902 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.