82. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects about technology, and how it has made the world a better place to live. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree with the idea that it has made world a better place. It is my firm belief for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, it has made life easier. Starts from medicine, and ends from army. Today’s life is much easier than it was approximately twenty years ago. Life is such a piece of cake today, but with those good conditions, the number of coach potatoes has increased and partially it is bad for our society. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my parents bought a smart house, which is the most famous invention of las decade. In the beginning I thought that it is kind of toy and it seemed me ludicrous. But after first time that I used it, I felt that it will become one of my lovely devices. It is very simple in use, for instance when I am in the road of home, with the device in my hand I switch on the electrical kettle, and it is boiling before my coming. As a result I have a hot tea just before I am at home. For this reason I think that technology is the most important machine which spins world.
Secondly, technology gives you a chance to connect with the person you want. Twenty years ago, people communicate through countries by public telephones, which were expensive. But now there are many applications which help you to contact with a person among continents. Drawing from my own experience when we bought a first personal computer, I downloaded the Skype, which helps to take video calls for free. Since then we can communicate when we want with my uncle who is in the Netherlands. Moreover we can send photos and mediafiles. It is certainly clear to see how the technologies have made the world a better place to live.
To make a long story short, in light of above mentioned reasons I strongly believe that today’s world is better place to live, and this is because of technology which solved many hard questions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 854, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le, and it is boiling before my coming. As a result I have a hot tea just before I...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich helps to take video calls for free. Since then we can communicate when we want wi...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ith my uncle who is in the Netherlands. Moreover we can send photos and mediafiles. It i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51256281407 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59166073903 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540201005025 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3959818818 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222186064912 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633360293144 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775655359221 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150027144029 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421409958214 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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