I compeletly agree with the statement that Internet provides a lot of valuable information. Internet interconnects people in world wide as compared to last decades. As for me, the most convenient way to access the helpful information is Internet. I will support this theory with examples.
First of all, many articles have been published across the world which can read them through the well-known website such as PubMed, Science direct, and so on. Therefore, scientist would rely on article's databases and continue their research based on what other scholar has found. In spite of their knowledge, Internet creates the ability to search for new information.
Second, as the university's student, once I had a Biology exam and could not understand some of lessons. So, I found a reliable eduactional video which helped me to improve my weaknessess and guide me like a teacher. That's why I got high score on my exam becuase I had remembered tutor explanation through answering each question.
The Third factor is that advancement of technology provides a gateway for mankind to connect with other. In recent years, social media has been progressed among people. By using Internet which is the easiest way to get a connection to our friends and family member. Although I have been living far from my relatives, I will call them daily through the internet. Personally, I could not think my life without haveing an Internet.
All in all, Internet has varieties of advantage if we learn to use in productive way. In addition, it brings people toghether from different culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...ation. Internet interconnects people in world wide as compared to last decades. As for me,...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...ation. Internet interconnects people in world wide as compared to last decades. As for me,...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ses and continue their research based on what other scholar has found. In spite o...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the lessons') or simply say ''some lessons''.
Suggestion: some of the lessons; some lessons
...a Biology exam and could not understand some of lessons. So, I found a reliable eduactional vid...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...eaknessess and guide me like a teacher. Thats why I got high score on my exam becuase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, as for, in addition, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10384615385 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81808141122 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3740724103 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0588235294 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209562392027 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665321757246 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664835993263 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111260704179 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907412058131 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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