Undoubtedly, invention of the internet plays a significant role in people's daily lives where they work or play. Some people think that information provided by the internet results in many problems such as accuracy of information and diccifulty of finding information. If I had to choose one, I would say that information from the internet offer significant information to people. There are several reasons as follows.
Most conspicuously, widespread internet access have marked a watershed in the field of education. It is commonsense that human resources are the cornerstone of a country's growth; without educated individuals, there is no hope for a nation. The internet eliminated potential problems a nation may face by granting access to innumerable online sources that everyone can use. A great example of this would be the rapid rise of the Republic of Korea. It's infrastructure and economy were heavily damaged by the Korean war, a tragic and devastating war that happened in an unexpected Sunday morning. The rest of the globe saw almost no growth potential in South Korea. However, their expectatioin were stomped within couple of decades. The Korea Government decided to exempt it's citizens from high internet costs by rendering the internet usage fee nearly free. Due to government's wise decision, citizens in Korea were able to become highly educated through quality information from online journals, articls and Youtube. This in turn lead to and exponential growth of the country's economy as it had far more human resources than countries of the same size. In this sense, internet helps people more educated by delivering a lot of important information.
In addition, life is easier and comfortable nowadays because people can find satisfactory solution for themselves. Compared to the past, Today's society, with the advent and spread of the internet, is overflowing with valuable information. It gives them easy access to information related to knowledge, skills and abilities they need. For instance, when my sister was in high school, she felt powerless and even lonely because it was difficult to make friends she could rely on; all of them seemed busy and indifferent to others. They even treated each other as rivals. Fortunately, she was able to het over her feeling of loneliness by researching online. Even though she did not have any friends, she realized that she was able to seek for advice and obtain words of comfort simply by reading articles online. By doing this, she was able to work more easily and solve difficult problems on her own.
All things considered, the internet gives people important information. the information can educate people and assists people's personal decision for the reasons I have mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23702031603 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85759701808 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568848758465 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.799978836 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.72 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23955386867 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626955871017 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771021426 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160232837381 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067008559511 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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