Dear Mr. Walker,
My name is Jim and I am a senior student studying business administration in Loren Brusque University. Recently, I noticed a job advertisement of employing quality assurance manager in the bulliten. I am writing to you to apply the post.
I will attain my bechalor's degree next year after graduation, which qualifies me to work in the post. Besides, I can work as internship now to familar the work of a quality assurance manager. Moreover, I had a parttime job as a manager assitant in PLDM, which enables me to adjust to office environment more quickly than a novice. I believe I am qualified for this post with my education background and work experience. I also attached my criculum vitea at the end of this letter. Please consider me.
Hope to hear from you soon
Kind regards
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...am writing to you to apply the post. I will attain my bechalors degree next y...
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... of this letter. Please consider me. Hope to hear from you soon Kind regar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 683.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84397163121 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94029586464 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2437580833 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236109974792 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911623436781 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936436018384 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174777394054 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118509093554 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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