The line graph depicts the number of radio and television audiences in term of percentage of popution in the UK in a typical day from October to December 1992.
Overall, the amount of radio listeners reached peak around 8 am. Meanwhile, television audiences were active in evening untill midnight.
Firstly, looking at the radio line, it is apparent that radio listeners were active in morning from 6 am to 1 pm, which was also the period that the number of radio listeners were more than television auduence. Especially, the quantity of radio listeners peaked at 8 am with approximately one quarter of the UK citizens. However, the amount of radio listeners dwindled after 5 pm and it remained the lowest in late night with merely about 2% of the population.
Turning to the line of television audience, it is evident that television audiences increased dramatically from 3 pm to 5 pm. Afterward, the number of audience were more than 35% of the total population till 11 pm. Thereafter, the quantity of television audience declined sharply to 10% of the British population. The number stayed around 5% from 1 am to 7 am and it started to raise again after 11:30 am.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85074626866 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83301772951 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.547539520022 94% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1928903964 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272966054539 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116980967799 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103314919989 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198819398893 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102698122486 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.