global warming is one of the most serious threats to our environment, what cause global warming what solutions are there to this problem
Global warming is one the serious threats to the mankind and all the habitants of the planet earth. When we compare the statistics of this problem, it is crystal clear that we are in a condition where we must act at the earliest. This topic has surfaced the contradictions of the problem and have clarified some possible resolution steps.
Indeed, all these situations caused mainly because of our own actions. The reason for Global warming is because of pollutions and that creates more CO2 in the environment. The excess amount use of Gasolines, deforestation, and the leading trend of industrializations are some extant caused these outcomes. Fossil gas emissions created more CO2 in the climate. deforestation reduced the recycling process of CO2 to oxygen. Global warming leads to the meltdown of polar ice-cubes, this lead to an increase in sea levels. As a result, there are lots of floods and droughts happens on the planet. A further more consequence of global warming is extinct of some of the wild animals.
solutions for this inimical situations can be addressed on the following counts. The government should bring more strict rules and make ensure of all factories merging to an eco-friendly system. It is always beneficial if the government reduces the tax on such industries. This influence more rapid actions from the industries to the mentioned system. In addition, each civilian has a crucial role in upholding the process. They must use more public transportation facilities than the private vehicles. This helps a large ratio of pollutions diminished from the environment. Moreover, they must use the right procedures to dump and recycle the wastages.
In brief, I believe responsibility not belongs to any particular parties. both the government and citizen should act wisely. In future governments must bring some more detailed systems to monitor or analyze the situations to preferred and alleviate the serious threat from this planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
... actions. The reason for Global warming is because of pollutions and that creates more CO2...
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Line 2, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Deforestation
...ssions created more CO2 in the climate. deforestation reduced the recycling process of CO2 to...
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Line 2, column 654, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...equence of global warming is extinct of some of the wild animals. solutions for this inim...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Solutions
... extinct of some of the wild animals. solutions for this inimical situations can be add...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
... not belongs to any particular parties. both the government and citizen should act w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2246835443 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96350410722 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5389546837 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.0454545455 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246530825692 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616472449087 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082394706047 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137960481983 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792770442831 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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