Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
We are aware of manifold inimical diseases and its route cause viruses. Statistics show that we have more dangerous situations than the past. However, the topic has fuelled some contradictions making some believes the government should bring rules to follow and ensure that all parents must take prevention vaccinations while others contradict that each individual has their own freedom to choose the action. Hence the tone of this essay is to infer which view has the edge over the other.
Apparently, it is crystal clear that the government has their own rights on each of their citizens. It is proven that the consequences of not immunize are more threatening to the society. Since some of the countries are suffering from some harmful diseases such as Polio, Anthrax, Cholera. A healthy population always uphold their countries economy. If the country couldn't be proffered spending on their health departments, or if they couldn't spread awareness of the vaccinations then they consequences will be huge.
Paradoxically, Each parent must pay enough attention to do all the medical checkups for their children. I believe they should not see this as rule but as their responsibility to their kids and for their nation.
Having observed both the views, I would like to stay with my own stance that, both the Government and parents have equal responsibility for their children and the government had more role to ensure the reachability of the vaccines to each and every corner of the country.
To Sum up, In my opinion, the government should invest some of their economy growth in their health departments and make sure that the standards of the system are up to date.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, so, then, while, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03971119134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77363002188 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6109001639 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245394771664 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794978853488 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611626661373 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138021047075 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345199095494 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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