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No doubt or generation lives in a rapid technological progress which makes our world changes dramatically. Some people claim that this fast shifting makes our people unhappy and unsatisfied than our parents and our grandparents. In contrary, others disagree, they think this quick transformation in our society brings a lot of joy and fulfillment of one's wishes. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the first position. I think even though this rapid progress is helpful in some ways. Still, people, these days are struggling with the pressure of the speedy lifestyle, the do not have the same free time for enjoying the beautiful life among their families. Also, this progress and improvements destroy the economy which in turn makes most of our generation unsatisfied with our jobs. Following is a brief interpretation from my perspective.
First of all, our technological development brings several machines to our homes, cars, and industry. Such as laptops., cell phones, and smart cars. They look neat and smart to create a comfortable lifestyle. However, are they bring the happiness for each person. Unfortunately, our daily life is very fast and competitive. Which in turns pressurizes our life and deprives the happiness. For example, People in the past do not have the Facebook technology of communicating. But, they had the time of visiting their friends or their parents. While, we do not have that free time. We work eight to ten hours daily, sometimes on the weekends. We miss our parents, but we do not have the free time to visit them. For example, I struggle every day to find the time for me to study and prepare myself for the Toefl exam, I am a working mother of two kids. The pressure of the speedy life forces me to feel guilty against myself. I always put my job, my household requirements, my kids, and my husband as priority against my studying; therefore, no happiness and no self-satisfaction.
Second, as I mentioned above, we do not have the free time for ourselves. We live in a world rich with many scenic views and places of enjoyment. Unfortunately, our busy lifestyle abundant us from that enjoyment. A good example for that when I compare my parent's daily life with mine as a mother of two children, I feel our 24 hours of daily life is shorter than them. I struggle among my working ours and being a devoted mother in my house. Moreover, this rapid pace makes me incapable of sharing the enjoyment of playing in the park with my kids or sharing them their school activities.
Last but not the least, this rapid progress in our generation creates a great economic depression which makes the opportunity of finding an employment position or keep that position very hard. These days our young generation are finding themselves working jobs they dislike, but they have to work for a living. Furthermore, our daily expenses are very high. For instance, when the machine or the computer device interact with our jobs. Each company wants from their employees to be fast enough and multitaskers to work long hours alone. At the same time, they have to be satisfied and happy with their minimum wages. Do you think our generation still happy as our parent's generation? I doubt it.
Based on the factors I discussed above, I strongly agree with that this rapid improvement in our generation comes as a curse that makes our people unable to enjoy their daily life, our share their families a beautiful satisfied time and work jobs with a lot of pressure.
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the do not have the same free time for enjoying the beautiful life
they do not have the same free time for enjoying the beautiful life
However, are they bring the happiness for each person.
However, are they bringing the happiness for each person.
However, do they bring the happiness for each person.
These days our young generation are finding themselves
These days our young generations are finding themselves
when the machine or the computer device interact with our jobs.
when the machine or the computer device interacts with our jobs.
flaws:
Better not use personal experience as examples. They are going to create a lot of simple sentences, pronouns. Look:
But, they had the time of visiting their friends or their parents. While, we do not have that free time. We work eight to ten hours daily, sometimes on the weekends. We miss our parents, but we do not have the free time to visit them. For example, I struggle every day to find the time for me to study and prepare myself for the Toefl exam, I am a working mother of two kids.
But,
they had the time of visiting their friends or their parents. While,
we do not have that free time.
We work eight to ten hours daily, sometimes on the weekends.
We miss our parents, but
we do not have the free time to visit them. For example,
I struggle every day to find the time for me to study and prepare myself for the Toefl exam,
I am a working mother of two kids.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 37 15
No. of Words: 598 350
No. of Characters: 2807 1500
No. of Different Words: 271 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.945 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.694 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.666 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 165 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 97 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.162 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.793 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.622 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.391 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... brings a lot of joy and fulfillment of ones wishes. As far as I am concerned, I agr...
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Line 1, column 572, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...h the pressure of the speedy lifestyle, the do not have the same free time for enjoyin...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...create a comfortable lifestyle. However, are they bring the happiness for each pe...
^^
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and deprives the happiness. For example, People in the past do not have the Faceb...
^^
Line 2, column 544, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...isiting their friends or their parents. While, we do not have that free time. We work...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 98.0 43.0788530466 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2888.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 598.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82943143813 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78906305406 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463210702341 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.9 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 30.0 9.59856630824 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0869222538 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0540540541 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1621621622 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64864864865 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13327353564 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365903926985 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468777196745 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093268488987 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272019806716 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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