Some people think that robots are very important nowadays, but others are worried about the trend of robotisation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the era of 4th industrial revolution, robotic technology are likely to become prevalent in humans day to day life. In this modern day and age, robots are being used in household activities, as well as in large scale manufacturing and assembling processes. However, some people argue that robots may have a negative impact in the future and others believe vice-versa. In my perspective, I opine that the merits of this trend will outweigh the demerits and robotic engineering will be beneficial in our future developments.
To begin with, there are few concerns as it to why people argue that robots may have an adverse effect on human life. Firstly, some believe that robots will have an adverse effect on the human workforce. With the significant rise in unemployment rates around the globe, people being replaced by automated robots such as self-serving machines and factory robots will have a counter-effect leading into social issues such as increase of poverty and crimes rate etc. Secondly, by using robotic technology, people will become dependent on robots, in their daily engagements and this will indirectly affect their basic social skills as they will have less interaction with daily life activities. So in the long run, people will be inactive and may encounter health issues such as obesity, diabetes and heart diseases. Finally, if these machines malfunction the magnitude of loss will be catastrophic and greater than any human error. Finally, as far as their efficiency is concerned, compared to humans, robots will always be unreliable as they lack intelligence and imagination.
On the flip side, despite the negatives, robotic technology has an immense set of positive impacts to the future society. The first and foremost, benefit of robots are that their ability to operate in locations such as depth of the sea or outer space exploration where humans are unable to reach. They can act as a bridge enabling humans to look beyond their visual boundaries. Robots could help people to cross the final frontiers where they could find an inhabitable planet for human settlement. Moreover, robots can be a used in medical care for surgeries and monitoring activities inside the human body. Furthermore, since robots are effective and fast unlike human beings, they can help humans in their daily activities creating free and extra time for people to spend with their near and dear ones, which will result in improving our quality of life. As far as manufacturing and assembling is concerned, robots can walk extensive hours with minimal maintenance without getting distracted or tired. Also, using robotics in military situations, warfare and law enforcement can minimize the risk to human life. Last but not least, from the fore mentioned points, it is proven that robots can make people’s life comfortable and convenient.
To put it in a nutshell, even though there are arguments which are favoring and against robots, it is clearly visible that robotic technology is here to stay. As every dark cloud has a silver lining, it is our responsibility to adopt the positive aspects of using robots to facilitate and accelerate the future developments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80510653611 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521317829457 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 506.74238477 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5228993646 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.454545455 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120024566747 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436205828166 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291994755862 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804001227627 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263070619227 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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