The reading states that the elephant-sized edmontosaur, one of the most common North Slope dinosaues, migrate to south regions and provides three reasons of support. The professor, however, explains that the elephant-sized edmontosaur did not migrate and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the edmontosaurs's diet supports their migration. The professor contends this point by saying that the tempereture was warmer than now. She says that warm tempreture resulted in growing planets. She mentions that when these planets die it had been easy for dinosaur to get them and use them during the winter.
Second, the reading states that many edmontosaur skeletons have been unearthed from the same site which suggests that they lived in herd. The professor explains that livin in herd does not mean they migrate. She provides an example of Roselvelt Elk which they live in herd but they do not migrate. She says that although living in herd is very useful, it does not mean they migrate. So her example completely refutes this point.
Third, the reading states that edonosaurs were physically capable of migrationg long distances. The professor refutes this point by saying that they could not give up their juveniles alone. She says that because their offsprings could not travel great distance. The herd could not get their juvenile behind. So, this example clearly refutes the hypothesis of dinosaur migrating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2683982684 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57474970277 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7332633052 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0625 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257853843521 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801161378919 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750907946095 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153624288219 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670340390833 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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