Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give me own opinion.
Nowadays, a surge in crime rate indicates that our society seems to be losing its moral compass. However, some people argue that crime is attributable to social issues and poverty while others believe crime is a consequence of innate characteristics. The following paragraphs will discuss both views and my own perception.
It is reasonable to believe social issues and poverty are arguably the main causes of crime. First of all, people affected by poverty are likely to commit crimes, as those people are even incapable of making ends meet and they are also in desperate need of necessities to survive. As a consequence, they might develop a tendency to commit burglary or robbery. In addition, social problems such as inequality could also lead to an increase in crime rate. In some countries, for example, lower-class citizens or people from disadvantaged background are treated unfairly or even excluded by governments, which could initially whip them into a frenzy and finally culminate in a series of their anti-social actions, including arson and vandalism.
On the other hand, crime may also result from negative personal nature. In the first place, some psychological scientists have established that aggressive individuals have higher possibility of becoming a criminal in the future in comparison with kind people, since aggressive people are more likely to be violent towards others and have a tendency to commit murder and rape. Furthermore, bad characteristics such as greed could also breed future offenders, as greedy people are normally prone to the temptation of money. As a result, there is higher likelihood that they will be involved in variety of financial crimes such as fraud or bribery.
In my opinion, crime is attributed to a wide range of factors including social problems, poverty, and a person’s innate characteristics. However, it is our obligation to be a law-abiding citizen to maintain the moral compass of our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, may, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29073482428 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04548096732 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7308247861 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345532755418 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11134182194 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877600267293 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190542214573 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567446538044 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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