Two pie charts
The first pie chart compares the average percentage of energy used for some purposes by families in Australia and the second pie graph illustrates the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions produced by those energy sources.
It is clear from the two pie charts that Australian households used the largest energy proportion for heating and water heating produced more greenhouse gas emissions than other purposes.
In terms of Australian family energy use, the proportion of energy used for heating was highest, at 42% of the total energy, while the figure for water heating was lower, at 30%. Other appliances accounted for 15% of the total energy used, compared to 7% of refrigeration, 4% of lighting and 2% of cooling, respectively.
The percentage of greenhouse gas emissions created by water heating was highest, at 32% of the total greenhouse gas emissions, whereas the figure for other appliances was more than a quarter, at 28%. 14% of the total greenhouse gas emissions made by refrigeration, while the figures for heating, lighting and cooling were 15%, 18% and 3%, respectively
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- Table 67
- In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impacts of ageing populations. 70
- Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 55
- Process 67
- Two pie charts 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21022727273 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89221289031 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494318181818 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7633851602 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127775639646 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769933594178 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109701380269 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115490039127 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11664307182 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.