The two pie chart give data about health rates from infection diseases in Canada between 1900 and 1930
The given two Pie Charts depict the information regarding people who were died due to infection aliments. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
From an overall analysis, a major striking features can be noticed that similar percentile of canadians were died owing to measles in both years.
It is crystal clear that 37% residence of Canada were suffered from diphtheria in the very first year, however in later year, this percentum was decreased by 13%. In the case of typhoid, death's rate was 29% in initial year, in later year and 18% people faced this disease in 1930. Moreover there was only 4% different was witnessed in the proportion of death cases by cough during the time period of 1900 and 1930.
Probe ahead, 9% as well as 5% canadians were died by fever in 1900 and 1930 respectively. Luckily, minimal ratio was observed in the other ( non-pandemic) sector's death cases that was accounted as 2% merely. Unluckily, this percentum I was arrived at 26% after 3 decades. Further more maximum total death rates was in 1900, whereas minimum can be seen in 1930.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feature'?
Suggestion: feature
...m an overall analysis, a major striking features can be noticed that similar percentile ...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... 18% people faced this disease in 1930. Moreover there was only 4% different was witness...
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Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... minimal ratio was observed in the other non-pandemic sectors death cases that wa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84324324324 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52331133098 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6698716467 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182956182198 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698755595952 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484497796095 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10365082754 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540314064829 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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