Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent decades, the exhaustion of energy resources has become a heated topic for debates due to its negative impacts on human life. In order to alleviate this pattern, government should promote substitute production.
Now that manufactures intentionally dump numerous smoke stacks into air every single day, demand for alternatives to carbon-rich fuels is always at high level. Environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar energy and wind power are conducive to green atmosphere. For example, instead of burning fossil fuels to generate electricity, solar energy can be used as an unlimited replacement. Moreover, our natural resources are scarce, which means it is impossible to take them for granted over generations. According to scientists, if environmentalists did not find substitutes sources from now, in the next generation, our Earth would likely to run out of current energy sources to supply for manufacturing as well as daily living.
In addition, new alternatives allow citizens to have various choices and, therefore, improve productivity of active plants. First, thanks to appearances of alternative sources, people are less reliant on gases and fossil fuels. For instance, that the number of commuters utilizing solar vehicles has rocketed in some latest years at the expense of the fossil fuel one contributes to the decrease in air pollution. Second, since citizens are susceptible to prices, new launch substitutes acts as an incentive for competitive market where people can use energy with lower prices. In reality, gas and oil used to the oligopoly in fuel market, however, people now are free to use all of devices and vehicles regardless of types of inputs.
In conclusion, as the demand for alternative sources of energy is on the verge of alarming, governments should take steps to promote this process immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41034482759 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05157607278 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5208864614 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112301318496 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468801374104 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690758740737 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100241189614 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726507015892 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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