Some people believe that doing experiments on animals are brutal, while others feel that it is favourable for the advancement of science. This essay will discuss both sides and reach a conclusion.
We must acknowledge that carrying out trials on animals are inhuman and barbaric. To illustrate, they are commonly subjected to force feeding, forced inhalation, food and water deprivation, prolonged periods of physical restrain and the infliction of pain to study its effects and remedies. Which is why, unnecessary complications such as vomiting, seizures, internal bleeding and organ damage animals are found, and eventually are killed afterwards.
However, animals testing has contributed to many life-saving cures and treatments. Take hepatitis B disease for an instance, which is a chronic liver disease, can lead to cirrhosis of liver and even liver cancer. What's more, it kills 15,000 Americans annually, according to M.D. Anderson Cancer Center's animal research facility. Vaccine of this type of disease was discovered by conducting experiments on Chimpanzees, therefore most patients suffering from it are cured successfully and has prevented them from premature deaths. Moreover, the polio vaccine, tested on animals, reduced the global occurrence of the disease from 350,000 cases in 1988 to 223 cases in 2012.
To conclude, although it is a common belief of many people that doing research on creatures is unnatural, I personally believe it is extremely worthwhile due to great benefits such as discoveries of absolutely vital medicines so researchers like scientists should continue performing studies on them.
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Look at the error message:
Look at the error message:
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
it is better to have 5 paragraphs. More content, higher marks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...rrhosis of liver and even liver cancer. Whats more, it kills 15,000 Americans annuall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62348178138 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97826049373 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0290444482 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121274388731 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464750505175 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065539019325 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849500900192 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950245947631 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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