Learning to host country culture has been in the headlines for decades. Some feel that it is easy by reading journals and newspaper. However , I agree with those who say that its better to learn through flicks. In this essay, I will examine both side and give my opinion.
As for those who believe that learning a culture lives of to host country is better by reading newspapers and books, they believe in this way because if we look at the recent victory of Trump's in USA, we can easily identify how it's policies going to raise the living standard. For instance in his agenda he promises of stopping of outsourcing of work, this means more Americans' get job and earn well. In addition, he reduces taxes for companies. According to a recent study by JP Morgan reveals that reducing tax will bring down prices and people have more money power in their hands.
In contrast, other people who hold the notion that to learn other culture lives through flicks and video programs. This is because by looking at the movies or their local TV shows we got an idea about their culture, their feelings. According to a study by University of Oregon which revealed that those who try to learn through videos are quick in learning. The same study reveals that if people learn in this way it is easy for both countries citizens to work together.
In sum, if everyone think in a manner that they can learn to host country culture easily through flicks and videos, I hope in future we will not committee any mistake which feel offended to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60218978102 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27097823608 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.431975548 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201111862269 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711659312646 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767611081077 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117107315144 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502327407174 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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