"increase and change is goal's people in life" Bertrand Russel one of the brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that changing is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. Affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that however, whether the world alter and increase make a people happy and satisfied or make them unhappy and sad has a sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, a huge extent, agree in favor of the former standpoint.
in the ensuring paragraph i will try to shed some light in my perspective through some ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
On the one hand, It is crystal clear that technology can help people for many thing and happen in people's life. it helps people improve knowledge. people in the past have hard time in life. today all work is simple due to every day have many instrument that can make better life. for example, in my life my father has car go to the work and this is the best way for time or all people exactly my family have mobile phone so call with all people and can make appointment and solve many difficult situation in their life. it is very useful. for instance, I love my mobile phone and it makes me happy due to i call my friends and send photo another point i can call to my aunt that she is foreign country and speak to him.
on the second hand, There is no doubt that technology can make people n early. all people can communication together with technology. as an example i will apply for my study accounting in the Germany and i will go there and i continue my education. plane help me go to the Germany with simple way in 4 or 5 hours. another example my government can go to other country and make many treaty without any concern.
finally, no body can deny that technology helps people can reduce disease. There is positive effect for people in all world. doctors can reclaim people with drag and surgery. it is very useful. I do absolutely agree with increase technology and help people and children due to in the past children and people die without recognize to solve her problem. as an result this is important because it is hazardous and danger. abruptly people fine plant and can change her life. I feel great when I go to the hospital and see people which doctor can search new way for disease. healthy life can make folklore happy. for example, my father had disease about eyes 2-years ego. We was really sad but one doctor in the Germany can help my father thus folklore in all world can not sad when technology help them. if your idea did helping can make people sad?
to make long story, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits an demerits of above statement, we can soon realize that the world is changing so quickly, people now are satisfied with their live than people were in the past.
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 70
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 71
- TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms. However, there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which informa 80
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 71
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2392.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 528.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5303030303 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38682054308 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.208052786 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1612903226 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0322580645 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09677419355 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209788564765 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639133964805 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592550524931 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128745818103 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758426151701 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.