It is important to consider how governments should measure the progress of their countries. While many people who think economic progress is the most influential measurement for a country, I agree with the notion that other progresses are just as essential.
One of the most significant courses to evaluate the growth of a country is economy. This is because economics effect to our life on a daily basis in the way how we spend or receive money. Moreover, a nation with a strong economic would brings more benefits to its residents. To illustrate, when a government has a steady financial position, more contributions to its education development would be incurred. In contrast, people would be suffered from lack of basis access to food, water, cloth and educations as a result of poor economic system.
However, I am certain that there are other factors which have significant influences on a country’s progress. Firstly, the improvement in society is an essential aspect; this includes equality, health status, freedom, human rights and democracy. In other works, a strong social progress is when a society can create an environment which allows its communities to sustain and enhance the condition of their lives. Furthermore, as environment is a global concern, this becomes a substantial measurement when analysing the development of a country. For example, Australia has become one of the best countries in the world due to its friendly environment.
In conclusion, although the economy contributes significantly in a nation succeed, we should not underestimate the other factors including social and environmental impacts as these are also essential elements to strengthen a country.
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- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: bring
..., a nation with a strong economic would brings more benefits to its residents. To illu...
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Suggestion:
...ns as a result of poor economic system. However, I am certain that there are oth...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'strong social progress'.
Suggestion: strong social progress
...n rights and democracy. In other works, a strong social progress is when a society can create an environ...
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...orld due to its friendly environment. In conclusion, although the economy cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37686567164 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16272451429 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6940965608 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.846153846 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0667461085764 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235203947404 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168652276332 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401131506428 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160221702344 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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