Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are actually important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most governments beleive that economic growth is by far the most significant objective. While the economic gain occupy leading role, I agree with some people that various types of progresses such as human rights, global warming and others ought to be considered seriously as well.
To begin with, establishing economic advancement as a main target can prove beneficial in three different ways. Firstly, needless to say, this type of design tend to improve the quality of the lives of people. This can be exemplified by the considerable increase in the number of jobs, high level of employments and salaries, which would raise the standard of livings. Secondly, the rise in economic development can ensure money for public spendings. For an instance, citizens can enjoy substantial benefits from schools, hospitals and infrastructures like roads, bridges and the rest others. Last but not least, the progression of economics may lead to globalisation and this process usually yield extra revenues from the influx of visitors and tourists.
However i would argue that the following measures need to be taken into the account apart from economic movement. Let us start with the issues of a climate change first. There are significant destructions of forests for private uses namely agricultures, live stockings and companies. Also, pristine atmospheres have been constantly polluted by harmful emissions particularly carbon dioxide and methane. As a consequence of these changes, ice glaciers are gradually melting, many places are experiencing acid rains and having prolonged droughts. So, the government must not underestimate the matters of global warming otherwise it may exert disastrous impacts on a national economy. Like wise, human rights occupy leading roles in the economic breakthrough. To demonstrate, last year, in Nepal, the government appointed police chief by breaking chain of commands, which doomed to bitter disappointments among police. As a result, criminals seized the opportunities inflicting widespread damages resulting to vast economic consequences.
To conclude, although economic development should be the vital mission, natural rights and environmental affairs have to be considered too by the governments.
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Essay evaluation report
While the economic gain occupy leading role,
While the economic gains occupy a/the leading role,
this type of design tend to improve the quality
this type of design tends to improve the quality
this process usually yield extra revenues
this process usually yields extra revenues
Sentence: Most governments beleive that economic growth is by far the most significant objective.
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1850 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.473 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.993 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.643 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.445 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...the influx of visitors and tourists. However i would argue that the following measur...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ux of visitors and tourists. However i would argue that the following measures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63609467456 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06684883554 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9037919338 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140882951128 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383961145622 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350128846724 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845378876638 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541202929001 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.