The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
As the world progresses, the class discrimination between 2 classes in the society is getting worse because the rich is more and more wealthy; otherwise, the underprivileged are living on the breadline. This may trigger some severe problems for the economy and social security and they should be taken by the authorities.
The widen gap between the poor and the rich will increase the risk of social discontentment and economic crisis. Firstly, because of unequal distribution of wealth, people who come from disadvantaged background often perceive that the wealthier are preventing them from occupational and service opportunities. They properly instill a sense of depression, which can cause high rate of crime commitment and threaten social order. Secondly, as for the economic aspect, the income inequality is closely linked with economic crisis. For example, the USA witnessed a great downturn in GDP of American citizens in 2008 due to the high rate of unemployment and unequal distribution of wealth. It is clearly that the wider the class gap between upper class and lower class is, the worse the economy becomes.
Fortunately, several initiatives can be taken to address these 2 pressing issues. On the one hand, the government should impose higher taxes on the rich and then use that revenue properly to alleviate poverty. This is of great importance because the amount of income tax from wealthy individuals and institutes will contribute greatly to state budget thereby welfare policies such as unemployment benefit and poverty alleviation programs can be implemented. On the other hand, social security should also be tightened to prevent the disadvantaged from extreme or illegal actions because they are usually tempted by extremists with some money to cause terror or commit crime.
In conclusion, the acceleration of crime rate and economic chaos are significant consequences of the wide socioeconomic gap and appropriate steps should be taken to tackle the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y should be taken by the authorities. The widen gap between the poor and the rich will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37820512821 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99851349321 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1039156839 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.076923077 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129373794849 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455960890075 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518792514055 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724411008072 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291438047318 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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