You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:
• Greet your friend and say why you are writing.
• Briefly describe a news story in your country
• Explain why people are interested in it.
Dear John
How are you, man? Actually, it is a long time no see you and I feel so glad to write for you again. It may be five months we have not contacted by email or by phone each other so I do not have any information from you and your family. Unfortunately, my smartphone which you gave me on last birthday was broken by my kids last week.
As far as you are concerned, economic development of Vietnam country where you left 20 years ago has been raised in last 10 years. This is due to the fact that you should come to visit some large cities such as Ho Chi Minh, Da Nang where many oversea companies, International schools have built by the foreign investors.
It is true that the students are always want to study in a well-known university so their parents will be spending much money for them to attend to famous college.
I hope that you will prepare your time and come to see me soon.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards
Lien
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| 2018-07-24 | dereksitou | 73 | view |
| 2017-02-18 | param.sabharwal | 93 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls have built by the foreign investors. It is true that the students are always ...
^^^
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...It is true that the students are always want to study in a well-known university so ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, may, so, well, i feel, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28021978022 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37693730214 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703296703297 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7932791651 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157985646501 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618494639078 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045372588698 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847147076276 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533885617259 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.