TASK 1: the table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates, various properties of the underground railway systems in six cities.
In general aspect, the most old has been built in 1863 in London and it has had the highest number of kilometers of route whereas the most newest one was belonged to Los Angles which was significantly short from others.
To begin with, even though, London’s subway has been built previously, the numbers of passengers per year were more highlighted obviously in Paris and Tokyo. Especially, Tokyo has had the busiest underground line compared to the other 5 cities. However, we recognize that the line...
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Sentence: Their was only 29 km of difference between Washington DC and Tokyo.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by was
Suggestion: Refer to Their and was
Sentence: Overall, we perceive that even London has the older underground railway system, the most which has had a sharp rise of passengers was Paris.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a WH-determiner
Suggestion: the most of which has had...
cities like Kyoto and Los Angles in where the system has been built in most ...
Suggestion: cities like Kyoto and Los Angles where the system has been built in most ...
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Category: Very Good Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.919 4.7
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
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