The table compares some information of the underground railway systems in six cities which is the date of opening, lengths of routes in kilometres and the annual number of passengers per year in millions.
It is clear that London has the newest built subway as well as the longest covered route. On the other hand, the one in Los Angeles, which was opened most lately, covers a sharply shorter route than the others.
Out of six cities, the underground railway in London was launched firstly in 1863, it also has the longest route of 394 kilometres. Meanwhile, Paris and Tokyo seem to have busier subways compared to the others with the highest numbers of passengers each year (1191 million and 1927 million).
It can be clearly seen that Los Angeles has the newest railway service, which was opened in 2001. It has the second shortest route of 28 kilometres, just 17 kilometres longer than the Kyoto one’s (11 kilometres). These two cities’ underground railways also have the lowest numbers of guests annually among the six cities, which were 45 million people in Kyoto and 50 million people in Los Angeles.
- Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children's study. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion?Give reasons for your answer and 61
- The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990. 67
- The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 67
- Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development? 78
- The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ach year 1191 million and 1927 million. It can be clearly seen that Los Angeles ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92631578947 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50879892023 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0736484091 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122071415656 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537077098112 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682698852466 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842700442953 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696863400642 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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