The given line graph illustrates the amount of fish, beef, lamb and chicken which was consumed in European countries over the 25 year period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, what stands out of the graph is that, among the 4 products, chicken and beef made up the highest pattern, followed by lamb and fish representing the lowest. In addition to these, the chicken trend was upward in comparison with the others.
In case of chicken consumption, it commenced at roughly 150 gram person per week as a lamb in 1979.In the beginning, the beef consumption was the highest, it stood at just over 200, while the consumption of fish was the lowest just above 50 and the trend was relatively stable till end.
Next, the figure for chicken fluctuated frequently and increased remarkably and had reached just 250 by 2004.On the contrary, there was an enormous split between chicken and lamb after beginning and the figure for lamb halved steeply to almost 70 in 2004. Finally, it can be seen that beef trend accounted for just under 250 approximately 1983.After that, although the trend stabilized between 1984 and about 1988, then it plunged remarkably and had reached just 140 by 2004.
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...tion of fish was the lowest just above 50 and the trend was relatively stable t...
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...between chicken and lamb after beginning and the figure for lamb halved steeply ...
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...en it plunged remarkably and had reached just 140 by 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86567164179 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54208896024 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0586612126 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.0 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.69756097561 1885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155249579069 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801112807233 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658825016014 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105841694894 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641735457368 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.