The graph shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012.
The provided graph indicates the amount of different sweeteners in the USA between 1966 and 2012.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that, among the 4 available sweeteners refined cane and beet sugars and corn sweeteners made up the largest availability, followed by honey and edible syrup sweeteners representing the lowest. In additional, the total trend of sweeteners was upward, despite there were some fluctuation and downward trend.
According to availability of refined cane and beet sugars, it began at 100 pounds per person in 1966 and then the trend increased marginally to just over 100. Next, the figure declined slightly to nearly 90 pounds with a fluctuation between 1974 and 1977.After this the figure decreased constantly and hit a trough to just 60 pounds in 1986, but it was followed by a moderate rise to roughly 65 pounds in 2011.
In contrary, the availability of corn sweeteners figure marked a significant change,which commence at 20 pounds in 1966 and after that the figure increased slightly to roughly 30 pounds in 1978.By following this the trend jumped to60 till 1986 and reached its pick by nearly 80 pounds in 2001 and then started to decline significantly to about 60 in 2011.
Regarding to the production of honey and edible syrup sweeteners, they began roughly at 10 and 15 pounds respectively, whereas the split between two sweeteners was nearly equal over the span year.
Finally,total availability of sweeteners observed that he figure accounted for nearly 39 pounds in 1966.After that the figure reached its peak to approximately 160 pounds by following some fluctuations in 2000.At this point,there was a remarkable fall to just under 140 in 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, regarding, so, then, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92364399658 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8039854113 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.0 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 1.69756097561 1767% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202302812546 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1133938707 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111385297452 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134576417706 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115101727735 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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