Recent advancements have considerably increased the complexity of people's lives. Many influencing factors are involved in the modern lifestyle which did not exist in the past. In fact, in order to overcome the majority of difficulties and obstacles associated with the modern lifestyle, one should be able to plan and organize his/her life to some extent. Therefore, I believe that the ability of planning is essential for every individual especially youngsters. The arguments to further discuss my opinion are as follows.
First, many factors exist which drastically influence people's lives that should be considered. To achieve goals in life, a young person should have an accurate road map which leads him/her to success. Many internal and external factors have important impacts in the way of reaching targets. In fact, the same as an actual journey, a precise plan, and road map are required for the journey of life. Since the modern lifestyle is constantly becoming more sophisticated, the importance of such road map is increasing correspondingly. For instance, imagine you are planning to go on a trip. You should exactly know which factors to consider, which equipment are required, which way is fastest and safest to reach your destination, etc. Similarly, one should have a precise plan in the scale of life. If one's goal is to become a doctor or an engineer, he/she should accurately know when to take what step. For example, what course should be studied in school, which universities have a high reputation in the desired field of study, when and how he/she should prepare for exams, what are the requirement materials, etc. It is exactly as planning a trip in a larger scale. Therefore, a young person should be able to organize essential steps and manage influencing factors in order to effectively achieve his/her goals.
Second, competition is high in the modern lifestyle. Therefore, people particularly younger, should avoid missing possible opportunities since they might not be able to have many chances in the future. In another word, modern life is changing quickly and if a person wants to keep up with this fast pace he/she should be able to have control over life. This, in turn, requires an accurate plan. If a person wants to be successful in a specific field of study or market, he/she should use time effectively. Any missed chance might make him/her one step away from targets and goals. For instance, back to the example of achieving academic goals, one should consider competition as an important factor and regulate his/her efforts accordingly. For example, for entering medical schools, since only limited and highly qualified applicants are accepted, one should have a precise study plan to increase his/her qualifications. It is the same in every business as well. A business owner should consider competition as an important factor and plan his/her activities to become successful. Thus, since competition as an external factor, has a significant impact on the future of young people, they should have the ability to plan and use their time and chances in the most effective way.
To sum up, based on the arguments explored above and my personal experience, I believe that due to the complexity of the modern life, it is of great importance that people, especially youth accurately plan and organize their life to be able to achieve their goals and become successful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 800, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...a precise plan in the scale of life. If ones goal is to become a doctor or an engine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, second, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2858.0 1977.66487455 145% => OK
No of words: 558.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12186379928 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82347428534 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453405017921 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 921.6 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7841732401 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5517241379 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2413793103 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96551724138 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178186267048 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577125363085 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436628998666 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133422839101 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351588874736 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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