The advent of the internet has a huge effect on our modern world. Some people would argue that the internet is precious source of information, while others may consider the opposite point of view. In my opinion, the internet gives us unlimited access to valuable information. I will explain the reasons for my stance in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet provides us with access to all the prestigious universities and libraries all over the world. Let go back in time to the sixties of the fifties, was it possible for a student in Egypt to see the curriculum of Harvard university in just minutes or even seconds? Now, it is possible within a click of your mouse to browse the websites of the most high-ranked universities in the globe. In other words, education and knowledge has become available more than any time in the human history. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I wanted to take study certain course, which was very important to may career, but unluckily, it was very expensive. However, I found this course on some MOOC site delivered by a very well-known American university. Hence, I started studying while I am at my home. Without the internet, that achievement would be nearly a mere dream.
Another noticeable reason, the internet can give us the chance to work online and make money. Not only can you get knowledge, but also money. It is conspicuous that the online trade is growing rapidly. Many people have gained lot of money through the internet. What is more, many individuals are now working online as freelancers, where they provide their services for clients in myriad of specializations. Hence, the internet is very beneficial source of jobs and money.
In conclusion, it goes without saying that the cons of the internet overweigh any negative side. This mainly because of two reasons. It provides unlimited amount of valuable information, and it provide financial income for many persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... amount of valuable information, and it provide financial income for many persons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94242424242 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7722039579 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.484066269 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1363636364 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20144376057 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495801487062 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513458087068 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116940447905 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368161034031 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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