Author write blog which tell the measures counter to prevent the dementia which is occuring in our aging community. Author suggested that , establishment of the social dance program at all Golden Age Senior residences which become more cost effictive

Author write blog which tell the measures counter to prevent the dementia which is occuring in our aging community. Author suggested that, establishment of the social dance program at all Golden Age Senior residences which become more cost effictive and also prevent the dementia. This recommendation or the conclusion logically not convincing the reader beacuse the argument which is lack of curcial evidences.

Firslty in the first sentences the mentioning the Novel therapy which uesd to decrease the incident of dementia in our aging community. The is not explain here. What is mean by novel therapy is unclear from the argument. what the therapy actually used ? how it help to prevent the demantia. All this information is not provided by the author. Which is essential to make this conclusion more stronger.

Secondly the author said that, the 21 years study conducted by Albert Einstein College of Medicine, many physical activities like playing tennis or golf, swimming, bicycling, dancing and the walking for exercise provide the carsiovasculaer benefits for seniors but hte dancing is only physcial activity which offered the protection against the demantia. But here the author not explaining how the dancing is only the physcial activity than any other physical activity to protect agianst the demantia. It also not mentaning the benefit over another activity. That why this statement is not logically ture, not holding highly weighted point to convencing the reader. Because the another mention activities also include the physcial exercise then why the only dancing have more important. If so then why the Golden age resident does not have space for dancing and does perfrom the social dancing. This both statement beocmes paradox to each other. Firstly author said that the, 21 years study show the dancing is good for demantia then up till now why the space for dance is not avaliblein Golden age resident. As study of this is 21 years. Whole argument missing the strong evidences.

Howe ever, author said that dematia suffer resident way from the independent living apartment to more heavily staffed so that it become more costly to operate assisted living quarted. But what is realtionship between dancing and the living apparment is not mentioned. how they are related. All are confusing to reader. Author have provide how the social dancing prevent the demantia.

Finally, to summing it up author have to provide concise, detailed and scientic proof about the that only the dancing is prevent the demantia. without proper information we can not reach accurate conclusion.

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