A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
To make our ecological situation better, we have to do something such as increasing the industrial and agricultural process or have the more touristic place to attract tourists from other countries. Developing country will help to open new horizons. In our country, the government has a plan to settle the plant near our city. This plan is double edged sword. I have just tried to discuss every point step by step.
First of all, having a factory in our city will cause the city to be known all over the country and have a good supply of money. After this industry, our city will exert its own products. Money from the factory can be spent on accommodation of population.
Secondly, this factory will be a source of work that can diminish the rate of unemployment. Our city is not rich enough but after this plan, it can be. It will make hundreds of people to smile.
On the other hand, this factory will cause a lot of problems. As you know 3 out of 10 suffer from asthma and they can not breathe when something going wrong in the air. That is the reason, having some pollution in the air will cause them to face some problems. Having plant near the city will cause to have pollutants in the air. Also, pollution of gasses can cause the acid rain problem. Poisonous gasses such as sulfur dioxide and nitrogen dioxide will cause acid rain and this acid rain can destroy statues, kill the trees. All these are an ecological problem that we can come across with them.
In conclusion, for me being workless is better than being an ill and suffer from a disease that can’t be a cure. That is why I am totally against of having a factory in our city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49337748344 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37735661637 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4399206555 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.85 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788926098551 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309722832494 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276880262472 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050569339901 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120187373683 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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