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Is ambition is a positive or negative characteristic? Is it necessary for success?
Presently, in many situations, an eagerness is highly regarded. An eagerness can illustrate right path, help to hard-work and achieve the dream. Although eagerness has a dark side, I believe, within the limit, eagerness is a driving force towards success.
To begin with, anything, which is in excess, is good for nothing. It is applicable to eagerness also. Eagerness is often associated with negative characteristics such as greed, intolerance, power and so on. To become a wealthy man within a short time, force people to resort unfair means to heap wealth. It is also linked with ruthlessness. ...
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Sentence: Thirdly, being eagerness make us adaptable and tolerant.
Description: The fragment eagerness make us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
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Avg. Sentence Length: 13.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.316 7.5
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 331 350
No. of Characters: 1580 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.265 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.773 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.722 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.316 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.52 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.419 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5