Writing task 1 : Factors affecting work performance between age 18-30 and 45-60.
In this data, I will describe the bar chart about issues influence achievement employment.
According to the data, the bar chart illustration both of groups that are the highest rates of group age 18-30 among chance for personal development attain 91%, following to relax working environment attain 80%, promotion prospect attain 80%, money attain 72%, team spirit attain 60%, job satisfaction attain 72%, competent boss attain 70%, job security and respect from colleagues attain 40%, and work environment attain 31%.
Nevertheless, the information data demonstration both of groups that are the lowest rates of group age 45-60 among money reach 70%, following to team spirit reach 60%, competent boss reach 52%, promotion prospects and job satisfaction reach 50%, respect from colleagues reach 43%, chance for personal development reach 40%, relax to work environment reach 32%, work environment reach 31%, and job security reach 20%.
Over all, these are my reports.
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According to the data, the bar chart illustration both of groups that are...
Correct: According to the data, the bar chart illustrates both of groups that are...
flaws:
No. of Words: 144 200 (more words wanted)
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4 (what did you get from the charts? need a conclusion instead of 'Over all, these are my reports.')
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 3 9
No. of Words: 144 200
No. of Characters: 751 900
No. of Different Words: 71 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.464 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.215 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.902 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 48 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.055 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.613 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.193 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4