Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our planet is fundamental part in our existence. Without the Earth, there is no mens of life. Since the mankind has lived on this planet, the enviroment of it has been changed dramtically. Some people feel that the alteration has improved our precious planet. While others hold another opinion. In my view, Human activity has harmed the Earth much more ir has helped for many reasons.
First, is pollutions. When the advent of technology during the last decades, the human activities have increased dramatically toword discovering new energy sources, in addtion to advanced the industrial tehnologies. All of these activities lead to pollute The earth air, water, and even soil. For example, When I was in the university, I studies a class specialize in environmental pollution caused by human activites. I learned from this course that, oil spill that comes a result of laking oils from oil rigs, wells, and even tankers have destroyed not only the marine populations in oceans, but also do severe damaged to the lands that devastated the crops. Moreover, these oil lakes are so difficult to clean up and recovered, in fact, they would takes several years to get full recovered whethear the lakes were in land . or off-shore. THis course taught me that human activites pollute The precious planets which can leadd to diseaters on long term.
Second, animals populations and plants species have destroyed. As the populations have increased, the nneds for food and other sources need too. This means people increase wood-cutting down and over hunting activites to provide the necessary materials. For instance, when I came to Texas 2 years ago, I have been living in small town at suburbs. I learned from locals there that this town was ranches for livestocks, and also they were planting crops fields for miles. But, because of increasing in poulations, demands also increse, this town had been changed by destroyed all these crops fields. Also, people started cutting down woods to supply need of building, like houses. Also, many animals that fed on these trees have been wither killed or hunted. Today, these areas become houses, offices, and building. As you can see, human activites have been harmed the Earth by destroying green areas.
In short, the Earth has been harmed from human activity. Not only from pollutions that reslted from these activites, but also do increased in popluations affect too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation has improved our precious planet. While others hold another opinion. In my view...
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Suggestion:
...t of technology during the last decades, the human activities have increased dram...
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Suggestion: study
...xample, When I was in the university, I studies a class specialize in environmental pol...
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Suggestion: take
...n up and recovered, in fact, they would takes several years to get full recovered whe...
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...ecovered whethear the lakes were in land . or off-shore. THis course taught me tha...
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...vered whethear the lakes were in land . or off-shore. THis course taught me that h...
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...oyed. As the populations have increased, the nneds for food and other sources nee...
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...d and other sources need too. This means people increase wood-cutting down and ov...
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...imals that fed on these trees have been wither killed or hunted. Today, these areas b...
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...ave been wither killed or hunted. Today, these areas become houses, offices, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, even so, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08816120907 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57509619748 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591939546599 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.275983891 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.88 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154154483564 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476535909882 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619568663215 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111363498513 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493808244218 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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