Admittedly, childhood and school years, teenage, then adulthood are the criteria which, is to be considered as growth and development of the people. However, many people think that, childhood and school years are the greater relevant period for the good life. Hence, this concept is inevitable and I completely agree with this.
To begin with, childhood period and school years are the most beneficial one for our daily life, owing to that, we are freedom in every moments and to get a feeling of tension free environment. Although, only focus on their studies and do not interfere with hassles and menaces which are created by the family. Thereafter, the attitude and skills are developing exceeded moreover, they should not pay an attention to maintain the economic level and prestiges to the society. Subsequently, simplicity, patience, sense of humour etc. However, they can make a renovated country in order to achieve their notion for throughout their life. As an illustration, my childhood period was really excellent and even I participated for many dance competitions and taught the same to other younger one's but at contemporary this became negligible.
Ostensibly, today's children are the tomorrow citizen once who finished their school years no one taking care about them, even though, they must make a good opinion and decision for their future. But whenever, we take the decision one thing you should keep in mind that think twice before doing. Students perception is always exacted one because their thinking capabilities and observational skills are more compare to other age categories. Most probably, they would be closely linked with their parents indeed, care, love and affections are getting from the parents. In a recent survey, most of the female schoolers are protected from crime, violence and molestation due to due to the effect of children insight in advance.
Having said that, try to appreciate the schoolers while, doing any relevant activities. I do think that, we the adult people create the world against the anti_social cruelties, riots, robberies and crimes etc.
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- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this? 78
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime, others however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmen 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'due to'.
Suggestion: due to
...ed from crime, violence and molestation due to due to the effect of children insight in advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25519287834 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71808469278 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614243323442 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3571127439 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219807573317 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062412954841 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499618860966 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129102730162 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220507117096 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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