Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world, where just about everything is more convenient and accessible because of the advances of technology, across all the sectors of society, it is almost good as saying that there are any disadvantages with the use of technological advances. However, no matter how far technology has taken humans, no matter how our lives are a whole lot easier due to technology, there are still disadvantages accompanying this level of access.
For instance, because of technology, there is less value in human jobs since machines are able to provide the tasks that human can. For business owners, this may be an advantage since this will provide cost efficiency because there will be fewer people who needs to be paid for labor.
Perhaps, another disadvantage is increased dependency on machines, which promotes laziness in people. Since our machines and gadgets can do most of the work for us, we tend to be dependent on these modern tools. An example would this is the direct access to the internet in mobile phones, we do have a huge advantage to this, like quick access to information. Social media, empowered communication and improved interactions via the world wide web. This, however promotes less face-to-face interactions. Instead of going to library to look up needed information, we can already access everything in just a few clicks using our mobile phones. In return, too much dependency on modern technology has given us health problems as well, such as obesity, and new diseases, where a large chunk of today's population is affected.
But, no matter how we look things, technology will always overcome its disadvantages by providing more. It helps us discover new medicine to prevent and treat different kinds of diseases. An example would be vaccines, which prevents a large number of deadly diseases such as Dengue Fever and Meningococcemia. Another advantage is improvements in housing, lifestyle, travel and convenience in education which also encourages innovation and creativity.
Although technological advancement may have its flaws, it is without a doubt essential in today's modern world. All of the disadvantages would seem miniscule when compared to the many benefits that technology has given us. In overall, technology is the bread and buller of today's generation, and without it, living would not be as easy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...n humans, no matter how our lives are a whole lot easier due to technology, there are sti...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ample would be vaccines, which prevents a large number of deadly diseases such as Dengue Fever an...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...doubt essential in todays modern world. All of the disadvantages would seem miniscule when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96711373095 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7875412125 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160489020278 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449287544299 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478660106275 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857079400179 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433563964247 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.