There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
There are many kinds of music in the world nowadays. I believe we need music for relaxation. Traditional music of a country is more important but it cannot be ignored that people has given more attention to International music.
Listening to music relaxes brain and releases stress. There are music like love songs that can enhance emotional feelings. According to study a pregnant woman who listens to classical music can help develop healthy brain cells of the baby. I listen to music to my favorite songs after a long tiring. This gives me peace of mind and relaxes my brain.
Traditional music is more important than International music because it is part of a country's heritage. I believe respect should be given to traditional music. Some people do not give enough attention to this kind of information anymore. On the other hand, International music is getting more attention especially from the younger generations. We cannot take away the fact that this is happening right now. My 10 year old nephew he likes to listen to music most of the time. He likes International music and once told me that traditional music is boring. I told him that eventhough he find it boring he should not make fun of it. That the best thing he can do is respect it.
In conclusion, listening to music can be considered part of a healthy lifestyle. Thus making a person's life stress free. I believe that eventhough I do not hear regularly traditional music but still the respect is still there and the importance of it should not be taken away.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...s boring. I told him that eventhough he find it boring he should not make fun of it....
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...t of a healthy lifestyle. Thus making a persons life stress free. I believe that eventh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77528089888 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72633451476 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.198557659 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.75 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.35 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417603988487 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149411744313 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124837096251 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291464561255 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13223922262 0.056905535591 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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