Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Over the recent years, the petroleum is a prime source for transports, vehicles and even as a gas which consisting of mixture of hydrocarbons. However, if the cost of the petrol is high it can reduce the traffic conspicuously and the pollution hassles as well. Hence, I do think that it is being a constructive part.
To begin with, I completely agree with this owing to that, at contemporary road traffic is exceeded more from the past so, it should be ceased. Moreover, petrol consumption would be stagnant which leads to control the pollution unless the major diseases can be occurs such as respiratory disorders, chest infections and other heart diseases. Although, our notion is to eliminate the health menaces and get a good protection from harmful diseases that occurs due to the traffic and pollution. Furthermore, the price of the petrol should be high, because of that the usage will be scanty and vehicles all are be at rest. Meanwhile, the great advantage is resulted as traffic free road ways.
Evidently, the government has the capability to take an action for prevention and be aware about the remedial measures for the traffic and pollution. Firstly, some of the rules and regulations should follow the people of drivers, and vehicle owners at strictly. For instance, the allowance of vehicle loads are prevent a bit in order to control the traffic jam these cases are witnessed in some countries. Secondly, the vehicle tax should be exceeded which results insight of the people regarding road congestion. for a while, these are continuously arousing means people will go by walk the transportation entirely neglected. Finally, road transports authority should keep age limits to take the licensure capabilities it leads to they will travelled by public transports, unable to use their own vehicles. Instantaneously, the laws and regulations only applicable for India.
In conclusion, the government take the action and remedial measures to develop and make the road as wide and vast sizes, it could be better for our future to reduce the traffic jam and pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09620991254 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89350045037 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1020072503 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140025821216 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488774474163 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502888337372 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912152943447 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426559758701 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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