Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and eduction. Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?
Over recent years, the nations are divided into two, which are wealthy and poorer countries. However, in order to prevent the poorer conditions of those countries, the high economic nations are knowing to cater proper food and education. Hence, these supports will provide through governments and under it's rules and instructions.
To begin with, each countries they have their own prestige,fashion trends and life style habitats. Nowadays, certain countries are poorer like Africa and Spain. Moreover, rich countries should be participated to do the caring and sharing for such countries. Furthermore, they can provide food, education and economic support. To be specify, In India so many people have been visited to low economic nations and they helped them a lot either mentally or physically for their great achievements. Subsequently also in Somalia about 90% of children are dying daybyday due to malnutrition and these woes are so pathetic.
Perhaps, in our country, some people are very good caregivers to the needy one's. Most probably, those who are kindhearted and they have the notion to delegate individual from the poverty line. However, their soothe and serenity will be gathered in a tandem manner which leads to eradicate the malnutrition and illeteracy. As a novice, they are caters the education related to diet, personal hygiene and lifestyle modifications. Subsequently who are consecrated and renowned people are giving admire among them for such valuable activities whichever they have. Hence all the turbulences and menaces are often disappeared by the renovated people.
Having said that, the wealthy nations should give some support like food and education to the poore countries. Even the government can give some share to them those who are needed helps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39642857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80433110727 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2999486672 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8823529412 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240723564217 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676387148672 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593670501397 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149190833869 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635628679548 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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