Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many
societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively
or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?
Televisions have very important effect on public which generally poor and unimproved country. Most of these countries can not inspire positively. Watching TV is just an activity for waste spare time in my society.
To begin with, technology makes people alone. People spend their time with struggling technological devices instead of social activity. Before the TV enter our lives, many citizen of my land use their time for group entertainment, talking with their neighboor or relatives. After that televisions spread out the all over the world people give up such a thing as I said. They have good time when watching TV and don't need to met other people. This making people alone and reducing their social ability.
Secondly, there so many unnecessary TV programs and shows. One of them is marriage and dating shows. These kind of shows only steal people time. Watching that sort of programs is totally aimless and wasting time. They don't have any positive effect on society. People can not learn anything about science, news, technological developments, history and cultural legacy of their country.
To sum up, in our society TV has not positive effect. People influence adversly and they don't develop themselves, they don't think about what's going on the around. TV is just time loosing and converting and addiction day by day. TV had make human alone while had reduce their IQ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...ctivity. Before the TV enter our lives, many citizen of my land use their time for group ent...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hey have good time when watching TV and dont need to met other people. This making p...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...t need to met other people. This making people alone and reducing their social ability...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ucing their social ability. Secondly, there so many unnecessary TV programs an...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...e of them is marriage and dating shows. These kind of shows only steal people time. Watchi...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... totally aimless and wasting time. They dont have any positive effect on society. Pe...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ect. People influence adversly and they dont develop themselves, they dont think abo...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and they dont develop themselves, they dont think about whats going on the around. ...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...velop themselves, they dont think about whats going on the around. TV is just time lo...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...erting and addiction day by day. TV had make human alone while had reduce their IQ.
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... day. TV had make human alone while had reduce their IQ.
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... day. TV had make human alone while had reduce their IQ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, while, kind of, sort of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07860262009 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54380212178 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5567407583 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2105263158 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0526315789 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0714823716147 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200232155089 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301875506435 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471132460484 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029067260583 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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