My name is X. I am working as a mechanical engineer in one of the most well-known car factories in the Iran since last 5 years. Recently, I have seen a brochure on the company notice board concerning a seminar about modern automobile designing that is going to be held in the France. In the light of the fact that it would appropriately boost my knowledge domain of the car designing, I am really enthusiasm participating in the symposium. So, I want to ask you to send a letter with regard to me some information about that.
First, I would appreciate if you let me know the accurate date of the seminar and the schedule of the programs that are going to delve. Also, I wonder if i know how many days the symposium takes. Beside, the accommodation is very vital issue in the light of the fact that it is 4 hours by plain to get there. Therefore, it would be wise if you inform me whether you settle me in a hotel or I should reserve a room beforehand. Finally, please send me the comprehensive information about the prices of participation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
X
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t are going to delve. Also, I wonder if i know how many days the symposium takes....
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you soon. Yours sincerely, Milad
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52912621359 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85643624363 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4584700092 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105668770995 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376212386549 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474116676491 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780617194799 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260247462946 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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