Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Dear Peter,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I feel really bad that it has been so long since the last letter. Anyhow, I am writing this letter to share with you the news that I have shifted my job. As you already knew that I got very less job satisfaction from the previous one, after hunting jobs for three months, I have moved to a new career in Microsoft Corporation.
It has been four months since I joined in this organisation as software engineer and my work involves creative and innovative thinking. Moreover, in this duration I have learnt plenty of new ideas. Consequently, I feel like, finally, I have got into the right place to quench my thirst for learning.
Furthermore, I would like to break another great message to you. It is that, last month, I have started a textile shop near my house, in collaboration with my niece. I hope from my heart that you can come once to my shop.
Thanking you,
Yours lovingly,
Janani.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-21 | vinshu koul | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-04 | shruthi4682 | 73 | view |
| 2018-07-06 | saiyedalihusain | 73 | view |
| 2018-04-19 | karankhanolkar | 78 | view |
| 2017-04-12 | Janani P | 63 | view |
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- Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and chemicals. What are the advantages to this? Do your think the advantages overweigh the disadvantages? 61
- Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things.What is your opinion? 78
- Some people think art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.Discuss both the sides and give your opinion. 73
- Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol Do you think this is an effective measure against crime What other solutions can you suggest 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60465116279 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5482631759 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6469023453 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171770665104 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697532995373 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714692231825 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891426993936 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980612122953 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.