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As a dynamic student , I always try my best to participate in as much as after school activities that I can such as the football club, the music club, to many but a few. And of course, some of them are really memorable because I have learned so many practical knowledge and life skills.
Since the last 2 year, I have been nominated and chosen to be the captain of my high school basketball team by all of the members as well as the last captain. Therefore, I must be in charge of our team progress and their training schedule. I am very strict on my team so that all of us remain highly discipline during the training and in the game too. Our fixed training day is on Sunday at 8 am and if a person is absent without any permission of mine, he would be dismissed immediately.
Last year, I was proud to say that we were in the top 3 of the basketball league among schools in Hanoi. It was such a pity that we lost the semi-final with only one point behind. However, it was still a successful season because all of us have learnt how to overcome our own weakness and the bronze medals were the evidences for that. In basketball, not only the skills that we learnt but also the ability to communicate and the spirit of team works make the dream works. As a leader, you do not have to be the best player but you must have the leadership skills in order to control and organize your team. After being a captain for 2 years I have known how to keep the bonding between my teammates because if we want to win, we must play as a team not a one man game, also I have to encourage them in the hardest time, to make them always ‘on fire’.
Besides basketball, I have also signed up for the Volunteering Club when I was grade 10
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
As a dynamic student , I always try my best to participate in ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...in of my high school basketball team by all of the members as well as the last captain. Th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, well, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 333.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22222222222 5.00649968141 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43883916288 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528528528529 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.6157635468 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.4247540888 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.242375264174 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0925447433944 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151781067708 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 53.1260098522 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.5310837438 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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