Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Process of learning never stops. You learn many things with the passage of time, that is why a best quote, "Time is the best teacher", because it makes you to learn many things.Many people are good learner and good implementer as well. Many people learn by nature or by books.So in any case teacher is a must and plays a vital part in learning process.
It has seen many times, people learn by their own mistakes.If we talk about technology and different processes people can get help from internet and from books and try to learn from them. They gather knowledge from different resources in order...
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Sentence: You learn many things with the passage of time, that is why a best quote, 'Time is the best teacher', because it makes you to learn many things.Many people are good learner and good implementer as well.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 148 200
The topic asked 'Which do you prefer?', it didn't ask you discuss both views. so you need always support your preference like this way:
para 1: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion: because of reasons 1,2,3, so i agree/disagree.
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1378 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.46 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.283 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.063 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.415 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.611 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.222 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5