In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes or crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
The rate of crime increase in most counties. In this essay I can give you what I think is the main causes of crime and how can we deal those causes.
Everyday, every hours and every minute we can not count how many cases of crimes happens. For example, a small country in Asia, like Philippines, here there are so many crimes that happens like robbery, holdapping, kidnapping and many more. I think that those cases are happening because a lot of filipino, does not have work, does not have money to buy foods for their daily needs. Also, some people does it because they think that it is right. For robbing something that is not yours, like cellphones, laptop or wallet, they do it because they think that is much easier to do than to find a job. But if we have a strict security and our governments will provide works for all of us we can avoid this to happen. In addition, if all people can study and finish their education they can find a better job also they will know what is the right thing to do.
In my conclusion, we can deal those causes by having a job that can compensate our daily needs. Thos crimes also can be avoided if each of us know the right manners or the right attitude to live our life better without hurting anyone. As well a governments or employees must provide job even for people that did not finish their studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...e and how can we deal those causes. Everyday, every hours and every minute we can no...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a government' or simply 'governments'?
Suggestion: a government; governments
... better without hurting anyone. As well a governments or employees must provide job even for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35714285714 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22478593612 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4585149435 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338556747748 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132889337771 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141930499765 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295093595766 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159440963068 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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