TPO 41 INDEPENDENT WRITTING
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Obviously, teacher in nowadays win more respect than ever before. Athough teacher were also valued in the past, in my opinion, our society give teacher increasingly various function and power in present. Therefore, I totally disagree the given argument.
Let's start from the teacher's function. In the past, teacher only play a role in teaching their students by imbuing knowledge of human beings. When we read history in China, teacher are always describe as banal figure and it hardly to find out a teacher is also a warrior in battles. However, teacher can often play various roles in present. The condition that a professor can be found a position in company is evident. And it is not suprisingly to find that a technision worked in a workshop is also a teacher.Thus, we can see, teacher's function become various. That probably because our society need more specialists with our techniques increase, and these specialists can also become teacher.
Moreover,teacher were more appreicated than the past. In the past, we could hardly find an officer worked for government is also called teacher.Because they are more likely a warrior to start a battle than a graduate from Harvard. However, in peace times, many of our leaders spend lots of time in university and most of them also have teaching experience. And also, a specialist who have teaching experience are easier to earn respect than others. Beacuse our society have set such standard to evaluate a specialist. It is hardly image that a dentist did not take a lecture in university. Thus, if someone want to earn more respect, he or she need become teacher, or in other word, teacher have much power in present.
Nevetheless, someone may argue that these so called teacher are not actually true teacher. In my opinion,this just because teacher become various and earn more power.
In all, teacher have earn more respect and become more valued than ever before.And in the future, I think, these power and respect will get large.
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- 42 integrated writing 3
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- The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed a lot over the past 50 years. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
Obviously, teacher in nowadays win more respect than ever before. Atho...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...I totally disagree the given argument. Lets start from the teachers function. In th...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'described'.
Suggestion: described
...ad history in China, teacher are always describe as banal figure and it hardly to find o...
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Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... worked in a workshop is also a teacher.Thus, we can see, teachers function become v...
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Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , teacher
...lists can also become teacher. Moreover,teacher were more appreicated than the past. In...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...d for government is also called teacher.Because they are more likely a warrior to start...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d for government is also called teacher.Because they are more likely a warrior to start...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'imaged'.
Suggestion: imaged
... to evaluate a specialist. It is hardly image that a dentist did not take a lecture i...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...lecture in university. Thus, if someone want to earn more respect, he or she need be...
^^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...not actually true teacher. In my opinion,this just because teacher become various and...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
... earn more power. In all, teacher have earn more respect and become more valued tha...
^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...and become more valued than ever before.And in the future, I think, these power and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97597597598 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72086324362 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6767371943 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139921031048 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052871994564 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696601795721 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100965731581 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586665002653 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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