Most of the people believe that pupils are influence by their teacher rather than by their friends, there are different perspective of opinion for this statement. This essay agrees that teacher plays crucial role in the students than the friends circle. The will discuss about the how much teachers are putting their effort in order shape them as great person with fewer examples.
Even though, teachers knows that they are not going paid well, they will work for their name and fame and not for money alone. Their salary little to do with their job. Teachers used prepare for the class from different sources like internet, social media, discovery channel, articles, newspaper and textbooks. Further, they do most of the even after the working hour like in house which appreciating things about a good teacher. Because of them only students able score good grade in the examination without it is highly impossible. They can make scientist, musician, artist, physician and engineer and so on. So, everyone must prize them for their honest work.
On other hand, friends most of the time they want play, chat, gossiping which are not good habit for a good students that will spoil their entire carrier in their future life, parents must prevent such kind of incident. Even though peer group pleasure is advantage but still that leads some kind trouble in the society, which sometimes end up with social crime like fighting in street, gang formation, drinking and rowdyism. Every fewer friends only ready to help when we are in need not all.
In survey, it says that California state students crime keep on going last on decade because of the peer group pleasure. Those students are usually bunk the class and not listening to the teacher that important point here. If, they followed the teacher advice students might be better position in this society, at least they will be respected by others.
Times newspaper says that in Chennai student center which provides all detail about carrier, market demand for particular field, even sometimes foreign university, company come here and interview the student to give opportunity for higher study. This organisation is running by the teacher association Tamil Nadu.
In conclusion, without teacher no one learn anything, they are next to mother status. Like proverb tells that one teacher is equal to thousands of books. So, teacher is more influencing factor than friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, at least, even so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31654611211 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588972431078 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8607803027 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8095238095 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229923157671 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758569639265 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728469541203 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12204404313 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07047208818 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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