If I ever receive some land I could do many interesting things with it. First, I could use it as a farm land and cultivate vegetables, like beans, potatoes, carrots, etc. I like very much to farm and to plant all kinds of plants and trees, I feel as it connects me to nature itself and plus I could almost subsist with my own cultivation. Secondly, I could use the received land to build a propriety, like a house or an hostel, to rent to tourists. This idea would be best suited if the land was placed in the center of a relevant city, so that plenty of tourist could rent it. Nowadays tourism, with the low cost flying tickets, is an area that has much to offer in terms of revenue. Thirdly, I would conceive, building a house for me and my future family with lots of space, rooms and a big garden. With this option, me and my family could have a high living standard, in comparison with people that rent houses or live in flats, since it is rare to have a house like with a big garden nowadays. In conclusion, I really don´t know exactly what I would want to do if I ever received some land, I pointed out possible options but since it is a great opportunity and life changing I would have to take more time to think before I enroll in a decision.
- 149.Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer. 60
- A foreign visitor has to spend only one day in your country. Where should that visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reason and details to support your choice. 90
- What are some qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. 80
- Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If I ever receive some land I could do man...
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Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d to build a propriety, like a house or an hostel, to rent to tourists. This idea ...
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Line 1, column 1013, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th a big garden nowadays. In conclusion, I really don't know exactly what I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21161825726 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42241218287 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9585702547 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162810733586 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761428038522 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585813736209 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162810733586 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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