It si very important to do physical exercise every school day. Although this may not be ideal, doing physical exercise on ever school day not only relieves the student from the monotonous study but also teaches them to continue the practice for the rest of their life. Some people believe physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Others disgree. In my view, it should be a required part of every school day fow two important reasons.
First, doing physical exercise relieves the student from the long term monotonous study at the school hour. It is somewhat impossible to concentrate all the lectures as it is believed that doing the same work for a long time is boring. For example, in my school life, I had to do physical excercise at the assembly before the classes start and also at the break time of the classes. It helped me as well as my classmates a lot to prepare for my next lecture and to break break my stiffness caused during my previuous class. Again, during this short time of physical exercise, we would be able to resume ourselves for the next leactures.It acted for us a fresh start. For this reason, I think doing physical exercise every school day is required to induce students to concentrate on their studies for which they are sent to school.
Second, Doing physical exercise every school day teaches the student to continue this practice for the rest of their life for the betterment of their health. Many of us do not do physical exercise on a regular basis for which we do not get stamina for work as well as et sick often. For instance, I have friend who doesn't do physical exercise regularly. As a result he gets tired of doing a very simple task. In his school life, he wasn't taught to do physical exercise regularly. For this reason, the practice has not yet been grown in him. He not oly gets tired of doing a simple task but also he falls sick often. As we know, physical exercise causes you sweating which eventually detoxifies your body. For this concern, I think spending some time on physical exercise daily to do physical exercise is very important, which we can learn from our school life.
In sum, whether peoples think that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day or should not, it is very important for every human being to practice this habit to do physical esercise from the school days. So, we all should do physical exercise as a required part of every school day for our academic as well as health purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60491071429 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3929144033 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410714285714 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5483975598 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2380952381 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380025593168 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15778317523 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140779344936 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316395819866 0.150856017488 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132946364044 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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